Poorly written, poorly researched and outright offensive. Has the author got a bone to pick with the organiser that she would use such derogatory language to describe the dance form?
Please do your readership a favour and fire Nikki Lott immediately.
Fantastic Shira:clap::clap: They should make Lott go and have BD lessons - that would sort that woman out.Here is the facebook note I wrote about this and posted on the Dallas Observer's wall:
https://www.facebook.com/notes/shir...o-understand-the-difference/10150349066931204
I agree 150% the rewrite has an undertone of sneering. I am picking Lott will be worried about showing her sorry a#@& around Dallas with a very irate BD community after her.Stuff bellydance lessons, the woman needs to go do a literacy course followed up by a refresher in journalism. Better yet, she needs to be unemployed as a result of this.
I am NOT happy with the rewrite, it reads like a petulant teenager rewriting their civil war assignment, with a forward note from the editor which reads like s/he is the only one on staff with a degree in journalism, much less a passing grade in high school english. Better, I agree, than the original, but somehow managing to blame us for the title our dance is given and still derogatory and snide.
:clap:Way to mobilize!